Having just finished reading Khaled Hosseini’s And the Mountains Echoed, I recall a conversation I had some years ago in the Bab al Bahrain souk.
‘You know, that guy,’ he says
Between the displays
Of Lapis Lazuli and silverware
‘The one who wrote Kite Runner?’
I nod, my eyes coveting
A single large bracelet
Woven with fine strands of silver
Into exquisitely painful
Circles and arabesques
Imprisoning
A myriad stones
Inscrutable opals, amethysts
As purple as bruises on a tender face
‘What about him?’ I ask
Half caressing the bracelet
And pointing at
A pair of earrings dripping
Blood-red garnets
Set in marcasite.
Thinking, ‘what does he know of
Kite Runner, he looks as though
He can barely read
Selling jewellery in a store
Over-stuffed with shawls, rugs, woodworked boxes
And glitzy
perhaps-these-western-tourists-will-like-them
Waistcoats and table runners.’
Then I see it
Desperation woven into tiny errors
in the embroidery
Startled by a gunshot.
So, I ask again
This time waiting for his response,
‘What about him?
The book was so moving, so violent.’
‘Ta-shakor’ he replies
‘But they were like nothing’
He whispers
Holding the silver bracelet up for me
Quoting a price and adding
‘Like the stories I have in here.’
He points at his head and his heart.
I see half a lifetime
As it leaks out of his hands
Torn fingernails
The intricate patterns
Woven by hard manual labour
Deep cuts on the side
From scrabbling down a mountainside
Hiding in caves
Or was it from protecting his face
Against knife attacks?
As he enters the sale
For the day.
Always well put, loved the details you went into about the different details you described the jewels and antiques. ‘Something sad about but then I think you meant to show it as such.
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Thank you Noor
Yes there was something abidingly sad about the book, a sense of loss. Thank you for commenting.
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Very pleased to report that this poem was a finalist in the Goodreads monthly poetry contest for May 2016.
https://www.goodreads.com/poll/show/134808-goodreads-may-2016-newsletter-top-finalists-poems—-please-select-o
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I just read this again, Rohini. It is quite beautiful. Thank you! Keep well. Hugs Joy xx
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